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I don't want to move
I think
As I stand as still as possible
In the pushy breeze
Staring at the clapping leaves
On every tree
And flowers bursting with laughter

I don't want to make a move
In fear that I may
Dissrupt its natural beauty

I don't want to speak
I think
As I sit
On the sharp rocks
By the swishing river
Sliding over the rocks
So carefree
And calming

I don't want to say a word
As it soothes me
With its every breath
©2004-2009 ~tainted-visions
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:iconthe-sohi:
:wtf: whoa. powerful

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconskotlex:
Inspiring..... it kinda brings back memories...
altough I am not sure why it's called scribbles.. to me it sounds more like "Stillness".... anyway... very inspiring poem.

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Like online games with flashy effects and cute anime-based sprites?
Try MouRO, I highly recommend it.
:icontainted-visions:
It is more "Stillness" I just called it scribbles because thats how I wrote it...

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If you really want to thank someone for their comments return the favour... ;)
:iconfrankienexus:
nature,and being in alone in it can have that effect.. cool poem tara

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I love your comments and your textures
:iconkazualty:
Powerful, yet subtle...i love it! :clap:

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You did it. Son you did it. You put the gun into your mouth and blasted yourself and that's it kid. You can't come back. You regret it but you did it. You've committed a suicide and your whole head is shredded...
:icontainted-visions:
:bow: Thank you :D

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